英文作文的句子結構單一怎麼辦?

很多同學總覺得自己一個句子說來說去,非常單調。比較傳統的做法是加套句,或者是硬加定語從句和分詞。然而,大部分同學其實並不清楚這些套句是否恰當,從句和分詞是否準確使用,最後分數反而很低。

那麼怎麼解決?兩個辦法:1 連接詞和連詞變化 2 內容變化

我們作文大部分的句子其實就是一個邏輯關係,或者更加粗暴來說,就是因果關係。

譬如說,簡單的一句話,我選擇上網課準備雅思,因為很方便。

簡單句:

I have chosen to attend online courses to prepare for IELTS.

it saves time.

下面通過連接詞和連詞的變化,就可以有很多種句子結構。

  • 狀語從句because, since, so, if, when等

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I have chosen to attend online courses to prepare for IELTS, because it saves time.

  • 連接詞therefore, as a result, as such, because of this, 等等

Online courses save time; as a result, I have chosen these courses to prepare for IELTS.

  • 介詞短語because of, due to, in view of, considering 等等

I have chosen online courses to prepare for IELTS, because of my busy schedule.

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註:這些介詞最好後面不要加動名詞,比較彆扭

  • 名詞性從句,for the simple reason that, due to the fact that, in view of the fact that 等等

I have chosen online courses to prepare for IELTS for the simple reason that it saves time.

這些句子變化很多同學可能會覺得很容易上手,但是如果千千萬萬人去寫去用,也是比較重複和單調的。這個時候,還可以通過內容變化的方法來達到句子進一步多變。

  • 增加並列句或者並列結構

I have chosen to attend online courses to prepare for IELTS, because it saves time. (原句)

I have chosen to attend online courses to prepare for IELTS, because distance learning saves time and allows me to learn something at home. (變化的句子)

  • 增加狀語(方式、地點、時間、目的、結果等)

Online courses save time; as a result, I have chosen these courses to prepare for IELTS. (原句)

Online courses save time; as a result, I have chosen these courses to prepare for IELTS, especially when I have to travel overseas from time to time for business trips. (變化的句子)

  • 名詞進行具體化

I have chosen online courses to prepare for IELTS, because of my busy schedule. (原句)

I have chosen online courses to prepare for IELTS or other courses which help advance my career, because of my busy schedule. (變化的句子)

  • 加上個人(或者其他人的)情感和觀點的表達

I have chosen online courses to prepare for IELTS for the simple reason that it saves time. (原句)

I have chosen online courses to prepare for IELTS for the simple reason that it saves time, and many people who have a hectic schedule would possibly make the same choice. (變化的句子)

註:最後這種方法,更加適合於閱讀文章,或者是口語,而寫作中不建議使用,因為內容比較重複。

大家看了這些變化的句子,不會覺得自己的句子結構單一了。

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